Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Divergent

This week I decided to put my Harry Potter re-reading to the side, and read a new book instead. I still plan to finish the series, but would like to freshen things up a little bit with a different book so I don't become bored. So, at the urging of many friends, I have decided to read the Best-Selling book, "Divergent", by Veronica Ross. I liked the book a lot, and went on a reading marathon to finish the book in two days. The book is set in a dystopian future, where everyone belongs to 5 factions, Abnegation, Candor, Dauntless, Amity, and Erudite. Everyone is tested and analyzed, and assigned to the faction which best fits their personality. This has resulted in a complete degradation of society. Everyone is a mindless robot. However, some people are born with a strong will, and are able to resist the brainwashing. These people are hunted mercilessly, and are called Divergent. The main character of the book, Beatrice, is one of them. That's pretty much the summeary. Some parts of the book I liked, and some parts I did not. Here is my reading analysis. 

One thing that I really enjoyed was the authors use of internal struggle to intensify and better the reading experience. She allows us to peer into the minds of Beatrice as she is faced with difficult decisions. One example of this is page 25. "I feel a lump in my throat. A stern voice in my head says. Duck your head and do nothing" This kind of internal struggle really made the book that much better. The author, instead of telling me what was going on in Beatrice's mind, showed me. 

One of the few things that I really did not like was how the authors writing seemed a bit cheesy at times. In page 37 she writes, " Tomorrow, these two qualities will struggle within me, and only one can win." It seems to me that this writing was very generic, and not original. I don't know, just my thoughts.

Overall I really enjoyed the book. I can't wait to read the next in the series.

Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Finished the book!

Surpsisingly, I managed to finish The Sorcerors Stone over the past week. I found myself with a lot of free time,and thought to myself, why not read? I really did enjoy the book, and how reading it a second time opened my eyes to several new aspects of J.K Rowlings writing.

One of the first instances of literary technique that I noticed the author use this time around was her incorporation of poetry within the story. I didn't really realize the first time around, or rather I didn't really pay attention to it, but I never realized how poetry/riddles really improved the writing of Rowling. In page 285, Harry and his friends are on a quest to save the school from evil, and encounter a road block. They see 7 bottles of liquid in front of them, and 6 of them are poisons. Only one bottle holds the key for continuing on their journey. The answer to which bottle holds the correct potion is encased in a page long riddle. In essence, this riddle really draws readers in and engages the audience. The first time around I read the poem and was fascinated by it, but I didn't really realize what it was. I didn't see how it improved the general quality of the writing as well as increase the tension and suspense within the story.

The second instance of literary technique that I saw the author use only the second time reading was irony. In page 262 the author writes, "they tried to remember how to make a forgetfulness potion". I never noticed the authors clever use of irony within the text. The first time reading I just blew through the story and didn't give it a second thought, but this time I stopped and really appreciated the cleverness of J.K rowling. Although it does not seem likemuch, these kinds of instances are precisely the reason why I chose to read the book once again.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading the book a second time. I'm planning to read another Harry Potter Book in the near future, and I'll be sure to tell how that goes.

Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Perspective Update

Like I said in my last blog post, I was planning to read the Harry Potter Series one more time from start to finish to gain a new perspective on the literature and writing style of the author. I also wanted to see if I would be able to glean some new information from the books, as I read very fast the first time around.

Last week, I sat down and started reading Harry Potter and the Sorcerors Stone, and I was pleasantly surprised that I was able to read so much more effectively this time around. I was able to identify all kinds of literary techniques that the author used, and instead of blindly reading, I was able to use these techniques to really gain a deeper understanding. For example in the beginning of the book Harry Potter (The main character) is shown to be the lone survivor of a brutal attack on his family. Voldermort (The main antagonist), had killed his parents and attempted to kill Harry as well but his curse backfired and Voldermort was killed instead. Then Dumbledore, a powerful wizard comes and states that Voldemort will return. This was a very strong example of foreshadowing. Of course, I had already knew what was going on, but still this hint really opened my eyes towards the authors literary style. Voldemorts return would later turn out to play an integral part within the story.

Another literary technique that I witnessed the author using was flash forward. In one chapter, Harry is 1 year old and in the next he is already 11. I found this to be very effective in advancing the plot of the story. Previously, I was a bit confused on this sudden turn of events. Now however, I was able to effectively read for understanding and decipher the meaning and implications of this important plot line.

Overall I am really enjoying the book, even though it is my second time reading it. I will be sure to keep you guys updated as I progress throughout the story.

Tuesday, April 22, 2014

Krista Ramsey Blog Post

Post: http://www.cincinnati.com/story/opinion/columnists/krista-ramsey/2014/02/15/krista-locking-into-the-magic-of-legos/5521245/


The column I chose is basically about the magical and captivating effect of legos. The column explains in brilliant detail, how young children are so attracted to the toy, and how this building block is not simply a mere toy, but a building block to life.
The quote that I think is best written is, "In the end, that's the magic of these polymer bricks whose funny name is a Danish contraction for "play well." With Legos, kids build sturdy little creations – which, in turn, build sturdy kids."
This line is the ending to the column, and demonstrates masterful syntax and diction. The first item that I really liked within the line is the last sentence. In the beginning of the sentence she states how kids build sturdy little creations with legos. In the second part of the sentence, she states how these legos build sturdy kids. Within that single sentence, she first sets up her opinion about legos, and then expresses it. She shows how she believes that legos are far superior to anything else, and are not really a toy, but a building block for life. Secondly, I really liked how she stated "the magic of these polymer bricks". She used a directly contrasting statement to really emphasize her point of legos are beyond a simple toy. Magic is an abstract, fantasy concept whereas polymer is a scientific, material term. She combines these terms to really show how she believes in the material aspect, as well as the magic of legos. Finally, these lines create a tie-in with the rest of the article, and bring all of the different elements of her writing together. Most of the article is devoted towards the timeless tradition of building with legos, as well as the many benefits it offers in comparison to other toys. She states that it requires mental processing, and creativity to use this toy. She also says how legos are used by kids to make their inner imagination come true, and build to their hearts desire. However in the end, she kind of makes the reader take a step back and think when she states that legos are not only a material building block, but a mental building block to all the kids that use them.

As I read Ramsey's columns, I realized that they all have a particular writing style. One specific aspect of her style is her ability to use comparisons to really drive home her point. In the first article For Better Vision, Kids Need Time Outdoors,  she writes the lines "The kid who used to walk home from school looking at houses and trees now rides home staring at a screen not much bigger than his hand. The teenager who used to research at the library or hang out with friends outdoors now does her studying and socializing in front of a computer in her bedroom." She very effectively uses a before and after comparison to drive home her point about the change that has occurred in today's society. In the second article she uses the line, "After watching New England Patriots coach Bill Belichick slouch off the field in his cutoff hoodie, it’s been heartening to see players like Wilson show up perfectly groomed for a post-game interview" to compare Russell Wilson's professionalism to Bill Belichick's casualness. She really uses this to drive home her point of how she believes that all football athletes should be professional and formal. Finally, in Ramsey's final article about legos she uses the line, "the magic of these polymer bricks". She compares the bricks to magic, as well as uses a contrasting comparison to really emphasize what she has to say.

Three Questions

1 Is it difficult to come up with new ideas to write about? Where do you get your inspiration?

2 How hard was it to become hired by a major outlet that would publish your columns?

3 Are you completely happy with your choice in a career in writing?

A new perspective


This week, I decided to read not just for enjoyment, but for literary purpose. Most of you are probably familiar with the Harry Potter series, and may have likely read the books. The first time I read Harry Potter I remember how quickly I finished the book, as it was just so interesting. I sped through the entire series, and watched all of the movies.

It has been over a year since I last read a Harry Potter book, so I decided to do something somewhat unusual for me. I decided to re-read the book. I know, I know, seems pointless, doesn't it? But personally, I wanted to do this for two reasons. One, I really wanted to read for detail. Like I said before, the first time I read the books, I finished them as fast as I could. I was so excited about the constantly twisting plot, and the changing turn of events, that I didn't bother to take a minute and fully analyze what was going on in the story. This time around, I would like to take a moment and really read the story carefully, and be on the lookout for specific instances of symbolism, abstract correlations, and a variety of literary concepts. The second reason, is because I want to gain a new perspective on the books. It has been over a year since I last read the books, so a lot of time has passed. Perhaps I will have a new perspective on the unfurling events within the story, and find meaning in what was previously meaningless. Basically, I want to see if by reading the book a second time I will be able to enhance my opinion, as well as my knowledge of these books.

Up til now, the Harry Potter series of books have been by far my favorite books of all time. I still remember the excitement I felt as I read each book for the first time in my younger days. What might be interesting to note, is that the first time that I read the series, I did not read the books in order. I believe that I started with the fourth book, and jumped around from book to book. This time around, I will be reading the series in order, starting from the Sorcerers/Philosophers Stone, and ending with the Deathly Hallows. I will be sure to keep you guys updated as I complete the process.

 

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

I finished the book! SPOILERS

For the first time this trimester, I was able to finish my book. As you know, the book I was reading was called Quarantine, by James Phelan. For the first time in a really long time, I found a book that I really enjoyed. Just like I expected, it was full of action, and had lots of twists and turn within the plot. Let me give you a quick summary. A young boy named Jesse is visiting the US for a special teaching program hosted by the UN. During his stay, a mysterious onslaught of chemical weapon hits the United States. The population is decimated, and all those in close proximity are turned into zombies, called Chasers. Jesse must find a way to escape the zombies, and find his way to safety.

There were a variety of reasons that I liked the book, but my favorite aspect had to be the unexpected plot twists and turns. SPOILER NEXT! Sorry that I am about to spoil some of the book, but I really felt that I had to include this part to fully express the complete turn of events that occured within the text. In the beginning of the book, Jesse is hiding out in a zoo somewhere in Los Angeles. He decides to travel east in search of a safe zone to hide and find refuge. He finds this refuge in New York. Upon arriving, he decides to travel to Canada, to see if the outbreak is less severe there. When he starts traveling, military personnel descend, and "rescue" them. They start shooting and killing all of the zombies, and the refugees are relieved. However, they quickly find that there is much more than meets the eye. When a top scientists find a cure for the apocalypse, he is silenced and his cure is not allowed to be distributed. When Jesse decides to try to cure his friend, who has been infected, he is shot at and nearly killed. Furthermore, he has reason to suspect that the military was behind the entire attack. The book ends on a suspenseful note, and my heart does not stop pounding when the book ends.

As you can see, the book was very suspenseful. I would rate this book a 8.5 out of 10 and I can't wait to read the sequel.

Monday, April 7, 2014

New Book again

I know last week I posted about reading a book on Ebay, and I still am reading it, but I decided to blog about a different book, as the book on eBay would not have provided great blogging material. The new book I started this week was called Quarantine by James Phelan. Basically, this book is a post apocalyptic novel, and is about a 16 year old boy named Jesse who is attempting to survive by himself while being hunted by "Chasers", which are basically infected zombies. I don't know much about the book yet, but I do know that the apocalypse was caused by some kind of biologial missile attack that spread a deadly virus throughout the world.

The primary reason why I chose this book was because of its genre. I really like Post Apocalyptic novels, and when I found this book in the library, I immediately checked it out. The back enticed me even further, and the idea of a horror/action fiction book seemed extremely appealing because I have only been reading non-fiction for the past couple of weeks. I wanted to take a break from non-fiction, and this book seemed to be a great release. I've been reading a lot of How to books ands more informational books, and I really want to do something different. I decided to choose a horror book because I want to read a book that is heart pounding and thrilliing. I looked at the picture, which is of a "Chaser" attacking a man, and this really brought to life the action aspect of this book, and made me want to read even more. I really hope that this book will be enjoyable, and I will be able to read it to the end.

Tuesday, March 18, 2014

Why I chose the book

Once again, I have decided to read yet another book. This time, I chose not to read a fictional story. I felt that I needed to gain some kind of knowledge from reading. But as you know, non-fiction can be pretty boring if the topic does  not interest you. I took a step back and thought, "What do I want to learn?". The answer was simple. I wanted to learn how to make money. Now, I'm only 14, but I wanted to find a way to earn a little spending money for myself. That's how I came upon "The New Ebay".

Although it might seem a little weird to be reading a book about Ebay, I decided to give it a shot. I have a lot of junk lying around my house, and maybe I might be able to earn a little bit of money doing so. The book is basically a how to guide to getting started on ebay, and details several tips for selling success. I haven't started reading the book yet, but I'm hoping that it will help me on my venture. I have A LOT of old toys, video games, and stuff that I don't even use anymore, and I really want to get a little bit of spending money.

This is the first time, in a long time, that I've read something other than fiction. I'm kind of apprehensive about the experience, but I feel that it will be beneficial in the long run.

                       

Thursday, February 13, 2014

New book, again

After I finished my most recent novel, I decided that I wanted to shake things up a little bit. I wanted to read something new, something fresh. Instead of going to the library, I decided to read something that I already had. I looked at my bookshelf, and found an interesting book. "The Iceberg Hermit", by Arthur Roth. It seems to be an older book, and I don't typically read these types of books. But I decided to take a shot.







To tell you the truth, I don't exactly know why I chose to read this book. The cover picture isn't that great, and the title isn't that exciting. I read the back, and it states that the book is about a man named Allan, whose whaling ship crashes, and is forced to survive on an iceberg. This seems interesting enough, but when I learned that the events supposedly took place in the 1800's, I became a bit skeptical. I was pretty hesitant about whether or not reading this book would be a good idea. I read the first few pages, and it started out immediately with the life of Allan on the ship itself. I researched a bit about the author, Arthur Roth, and discovered that he passed away in 1999. The book itself was published in 1975, so it isn't exactly new. However, I've decided to take the plunge. In the past, I've read some pieces of classic literature, and found that I actually enjoy them. So right now, I'm hoping that I'm not wasting my time, and that I'll actually enjoy the book.

Wednesday, February 5, 2014

I finished my book

Surprisingly, over the course of one week, I finished the book that I was currently reading. I found myself becoming so totally engrossed in the book that I lost track of time, and read for hours. But putting that all aside, I feel it's necessary to give a book review, as well as explain the theme of the book that I just read.

Before I say anything else, I would just like to say that "Never Give Up", is one of the most haunting, inspiring, and uplifting stories that I have probably ever read. The book, as I said before, is about a young boy who finds himself in the midst of the Cambodian Revolution. The Cambodian army is deposed, and the country is in a state of martial law. Young Arn, is sent to a hard labor/ work camp, and is forced to act as a slave to the Khmer Rouge, who are the revolutionaries. Arn sees his friends dying every day from abuse, malnutrition, and hard labor, and is fighting to stay alive. He spends many years in the Camp, before he is liberated and sent to America. Some of the stories within the book are downright chilling. It tells of dead bodies being carelessly cast aside, and small children being killed. Although some of the details are a bit hard to stomach, they are all factual. I looked it up, and it turns out that every single event that happened in the book, actually happened in real life. It's kind of shocking and horrifying to witness the horrors that went on. What really impressed me though, was the authors ability to channel the emotions of a small child as he went through this ordeal. This book is an emotional roller coaster, and I could imagine myself in Arn's shoes every step of the way. The authors use of metaphors, and imagery is absolutely stunning. The syntax, diction, and word choice all perfectly complemented each other.


The theme of the book, is kind of ironically, to never give up. I found it kind of strange how the author actually chose to put the theme of the book as the title, but upon finishing the book, I found it a masterful choice. Overall, I really liked this book, and would not hesitate to recommend it to anyone.

Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Surprise! Surprise! Why I chose the book

Yet again, I'm starting a new book. I've been really disappointed about my last book and how I quit, so this time, I tried to really put some thought into what to read. I thought carefully about all the candidates, and read the first few pages of each book. Hopefully, this new book that I've chosen will live up to my expectations. The book I chose, is "Never Give Up", by Patricia Mccormick.

As always, the reason why I first pulled the book off of the shelf was because of the name. When I initially saw the title, I didn't think that I would read the book, as it seemed like it was just another generic cheesy story of someone who keeps going after facing setbacks and achieves their goals. I couldn't have been further from the truth. This book is based off of the true story of Arn ChornPond, who is a Cambodian minor who finds himself in a work camp during the revolution. The story takes place during the Cambodian Revolution, and shows in the eyes of a child, the horrors that took place. For once, I paid no attention at all to the cover picture. I went straight to the back, and immersed myself into the story of young Arn.

I thought that I had found a wonderful book for me to read, but as I always do, I looked up the author before I started reading the book. Turns out that Mccormick is an award winning author, with numerous other works.

I read the first few pages, and I'm firmly convinced that I won't be quitting this book anytime soon. The story is written in short, broken english, and you can actually hear the voice of Arn. Let me show you an example. "No warning, the soldier, he hit the kid in the head with rifle. And the kid, he sag to the ground, like his leg go dead, and then fall in curb. I run away very scared, very fast". You can't get more realistic than that.

All in all, I think that I found a good book. It's realistic, emotional, and nerve wracking. I'll be sure to keep you guys posted as I read on.

Wednesday, January 8, 2014

I quit

I'm really disappointed to tell you this, but I quit my book. Perhaps I set my expectations too high, or maybe the book just doesn't cater to my tastes, but I hated this book. I know, I know, just last week I was gushing over how awesome this book was, and how I thought I'd found a crown jewel. Well, I guess if it seems too good to be true, then it probably is. Let me tell you why I hated it.

First, I thought the plot was absolutely ridiculous and stupid. The story is about a a girl named Tory Brennan who is the niece of world-famous forensic anthropologist Temperance Brennan. After her mothers death, she moves to South Carolina to live with her Marine Biologist dad whom she's never met. The island next door, named Loggerhead Island, houses a top secret research institute, and her dad works there. She becomes suspicious and breaks in, and finds herself horrified to find a puppy being abused for the purpose of research. She rescues the puppy, contracts a virus that the puppy had, and obtains superhuman powers that gives her canine abilities. That is the most outrageous plot that I have ever heard. For me, I prefer plots that may seem remotely real, not plots that seem totally imaginary. Just my taste.

Second, I hated the authors style of writing. Her characterization of the characters seemed really artificial and forced. I was unable to immerse myself in the story, as the writing seemed really superficial. For example, I'll give you a quote,"Anger exploded through my veins like the Incredible Hulk"(91). I found this simile extremely childish, and unsophisticated. The author failed to develop the characters in any way, as instead of focusing on the characters rage, as the author wanted me to do, I ended up focusing on the silly simile.

All in all, this book for me was a failure. To be honest, I am a bit disappointed as I had pretty high expectations for the book.

Reading a New Book!




Today, I decided to read a new book. The title of the book is Virals and is written by Kathy Reich . I chose to read this book because of a variety of reasons. First of all, like before, and like always, the tile immediately enticed me.  I mean think of it! Virals. Reminds you of a chilling, action packed thriller. As soon as I laid eyes on the front cover, the words, "#1 New York Times Best Selling Author" jumped out at me. I realized that this might actually be a quality book with a well developed plot, and detailed characters. After the pulling the book out of the shelf, I did what I do whenever I pick out a new book, and read the back. The words "Forensic", "Sci-Phile", and "Canine quick reflexes" caught my eye. How enticing! I turned to the inside cover, and actually found out that the television series, "Bones", was based off of this novel. I'm assuming that if a director was impressed enough by the book to actually devote a T.V series, the book must be of pretty good quality.

After reading the back, I realized that my heart was pounding. It seemed that this book would have no boring parts whatsoever. I let my impatience take hold, and I sat right there, in middle of shelves, and read the first few pages.The action started from the beginning, as seen with the quote "We sat, tensed, waiting" (Reichs 3). I was only on the third page and already my nerves were on edge. What was going to happen, who is going to get caught? Those questions raced through my mind as I read the book. My high expectations for this book haven't been disappointed yet. And believe me, I have really high expectations for this book. After reading the back, researching a bit on the author, and reading the first couple of pages, I think that I have actually found a hidden jewel. I mean, what more can you want? An action packed novel written by a New York Times Bestseller? I think yes! I am really looking forward to reading what seems to be an amazing book.